November 16, 2002

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The Buffalo News "I-did-not-have-sex-with-that-business-council" interoffice  memo

by Bruce Jackson



Sed quis custodiet ipsos custodes? But who watches the watchmen?
Juvenal, Satires

   
Steve Bell's troublesome book

Last month, Buffalo Report ran "Editorial moonlight at One News Plaza," an article about the book written by Buffalo News managing editor Steven Bell and distributed by the Business Council of New York State, the main point of which was that the economy of upstate New York is just fine, folks. Bell's book is in perfect opposition to well-researched page-one news stories on the region's economy his own paper had published.

Which is to say, the managing editor of the Buffalo News was writing one story and his reporters were writing another. Some reporters on the News thought it unseemly for the editor of their paper to be doing work-for-hire for the state's chamber of commerce, especially work that contradicted theirs in ways potentially useful in George Pataki's everything-is-fine-and-getting-better re-election campaign.
                              
Bell's memo

A week after the article was posted,  a veteran reporter at the Buffalo News called and said, "Steve Bell posted an apology on the bulletin board two days after your piece appeared. It raises more questions than it answers. It's damage control. One of the guys calls it the 'I-did-not-have-sex-with-that-business-council' memo.'" Shades of Monica!

Here is Bell's memo in its entirety:

        Memo   
        To: The Staff
        From: Steve
        Re: An apology               
        Date: Oct. 16, 2002
The book published in August called "Upstate New York, Corridor to Progress," has caused some legitimate concerns in the newsroom and since I care deeply about what we're all doing at this place, I sincerely apologize to any of you who feel this work was inappropriate.

A California-based publisher of specialty books asked me to do the text (11 chapters) for a 150-page book about the upstate region as a place to live and work. It was a freelance assignment and I received a flat fee for writing chapters covering things like sub regions, tourism, high tech, manufacturing, quality of life, etc.

Essentially it's Prospectus, in coffee-table book form. It takes an optimistic look at upstate and its economy, but does not omit the warts and realities of history. I reviewed the project with Margaret and she insisted that in my contract with the publisher, I would do no promotion of the book, nor receive any royalties or commissions from sales, either on the book or its advertising.

The publisher arranged for the New York State Business Council [sic] to sponsor the book. The Business Council had no editorial control or say about what I wrote. What I did not foresee, and certainly apologize to the staff for, is that this would be published in such close association with the Business Council or that it would trumpet the book as it has. I realize that the ever-present "appearance of conflict" is real and I apologize as well if members of the staff feel I've done anything to undermine the paper's or their credibility. That was not my intention.

I hope this answers the questions out there, but if anyone would like to discuss this further with me personally, I'd be glad to.
        Steve

People who don't look you in the eye

I always tell my students to be very parsimonious in their use of the passive voice because the passive voice tells a careful reader that you're probably hiding something. It's the literary equivalent of not looking somebody in the eye. The classic example of the passive voice in action is Mom coming into the kitchen, seeing the shattered glass and other stuff on the floor and asking, "What happened?" To which Junior responds, "It fell. It broke."

Bell uses the passive voice twice in his first sentence. The first five words are particularly good: "The book published in August...." Why not "The book I wrote...?" You know why. Saying "The book published in August" doesn't have any Steve Bell in it. "The book I wrote" does.

What stands out for me in Bell's letter is this: Bell doesn't apologize for one single thing he did. I can't find anywhere in the letter him saying that he thinks there's anything wrong with the editor of a newspaper writing a book-for-hire for a business organization, the contents of which may be directly contrary to facts developed by his own news staff, a book published and given away while there is an election in process in which that editor's words will have weight for the side in whose it interest it is for those writers to be wrong.

He only apologizes if people feel bad. That is meaningless. You can't apologize for somebody else's feelings. You can only apologize for what you did. Bell nowhere does that.

His statement that he agreed with Margaret [Sullivan, the editor in chief of the Buffalo News] that he would not take royalties is not very interesting: books like this aren't meant to sell; they're given away. So there aren't any royalties. Royalty income was never an issue.

More interesting is that Bell says he agreed that he wouldn't receive any commissions on the book's advertising, which means he knew or thought beforehand that it would be having paid ads, which it in fact seems to have. There are several pretty pieces about specific corporations, perhaps written by their ad agencies, perhaps written by Bell, and those were almost certainly sold pages. No contract writer agrees in front not to take money from the paid ads if the writer doesn't think there aren't going to be paid ads.

That suggests Steve Bell knew this was going to be the kind of book that has paid ads. What kind of real book—the kind you buy in Talking Leaves or Brentano's, say—has paid ads? Did you ever see paid ads in a Faulkner novel? A Michael Beschloss book on one of our presidents? A Harlequin Romance on romance? No, you didn't. The kinds of books that have paid ads are themselves ads, books that are puffery, flackery, books hyping something. Or high school graduating class albums, which Bell's book isn't.

What the reporters said

One reporter said, "That letter answers nothing. I'd like to know who paid him. Why did he think it was acceptable to do this? Why did he think it was okay for him to write what he calls 'an optimistic look' on the upstate economy when he knows the real condition of the upstate economy? He says he didn't know the Business Council was supporting this book. When did he find out? When he found out, did he do anything to curb their promotion of the book? As far as I'm concerned, Bell's credibility in the newsroom has been damaged by this, and his memo only made matters worse, not better."

Another reporter said he was uncomfortable talking about the whole sorry mess. "Because you would get in trouble if they knew you were talking to me?" I asked.

"Oh, I'd surely get in trouble, but that's not what I'm uncomfortable about. I don't like saying bad things about the paper. I love the paper. But we need to be examined as everybody we examine. How can we do our job if nobody calls us on it when we're doing it wrong?"

He was annoyed about Bell's making money when ordinary reporters were prohibited by the paper from writing for free about subjects far from their beats. "They're telling writers at the News they can't write for local publications about things that have nothing to do with their coverage area, but then you get a managing editor doing it. That's insane. But it's an insane place to work."

Another said: "Steve Bell has a lot of control over what gets covered. He's one of the two or three editors who is going to see almost every front page package that we do. He has the power to have a lot of effect on the local news coverage, whether it's tweaking it or allowing it to be done. All those kinds of things. If he's in bed with the people we're covering, well..."

It's slippery at the top

Which goes to the heart of the matter. How are we to regard the editorial positions taken by the News when the roles and ethics at the top are this slippery?

An ugly example. Last week, a Buffalo News editorial viciously trashed U.S. Congressman John LaFalce for having asked for an inquiry into the propriety of what seemed to be exercise of improper influence by a highly-placed employee within the Department of Interior on Interior Secretary Gale Norton when she was considering an important decision about casino gambling in this region. A favorable decision or silence would have been enormously useful to Governor Pataki in his re-election campaign. Norton opted for silence. In his letter about the matter LaFalce said nothing about the casino proposals themselves; he simply asked for clarification about the propriety of the influence. His letter was occasioned by a detailed, well-researched, page-one story in the Buffalo News.

So here's a highly-respected public official taking a page-one Buffalo News story seriously enough to ask the government agency involved to look at its own behavior—and the Buffalo News editorial page responds by trashing him for daring to ask the question that the Buffalo News itself made it necessary for him to ask.

It got uglier. On November 15 the News published a badly-drawn and stupider than usual editorial cartoon by Dick Bradley (apparently their replacement for Tom Toles) showing John LaFalce and Sam Hoyt in boxer shorts and undershirts, silly losers in the casino issue. From verbal scorn the News editorial page had moved to graphic caricature, all because LaFalce had asked a question prompted by the reporters of the Buffalo News itself.*


Do the editorial and cartoon simply reflect the honest and considered opinion of the Buffalo News editorial board? Or do they reflect some kind of make-nice with the upstate Republican establishment?

We'll never know, and that's the problem. If we can't trust the motives of the editorial board, if the News's newswriters can't be confident that their own editorial page won't undercut them a few days later, how can we take the editorial pages of the Buffalo News with any seriousness at all? How can we know that the reporters are being allowed to cover the stories that need covering to the extent those stories deserve, or that those stories aren't mutilated when they get to the copy desk? How can the reporters themselves do their jobs honorably?

How can you and I know if we're getting anything more from the Buffalo News than all the news they want you to know?

Telephone truth       

Steve Bell ended his letter to the newsroom by saying he would be glad to discuss his letter with anyone who would "like to discuss this further with [him] personally" 

Well, I had all those thoughts I just told you about, so I thought it would be useful to discuss them further with him personally before I published any of them. Maybe he'd have something to say that would cast it all in a reasonable light.

I called him.

"I'm not interested in talking about it," Bell said.


*I couldn't find Bradley's crude cartoon on the Buffalo News web site, which may be deliberate on their part. The site has a hot link to Tom Toles, who now works in Washington, D.C., but not a link to Dick Bradley, to whom they seem to have givenToles's desk and inkpot. But my scanner works. Click here to see the drawing.



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